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Cali Turner

  • Subject: Elvin History
  • Level: Flareadon (7)
  • Mentor: Lady Renette Kim


During the Age of Sophie Foster, the ogres let loose a plague that got many gnomes sick. This ended up being the fault of the Neverseen, who had persuaded the king of the ogres to let this plague loose. Sophie was fourteen at this time and was able to stop this plague with a Panake tree, which her gnomish friend, Calla, sacrificed herself for. The Panake blossoms healed the gnomes before any passed away, but Calla was treasured and missed. The plague still frightened many and caused the gnomes to doubt their alliance with the elves.

Grading Understanding Grammar and Mechanics Overall Quality Organization
25 points Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic. No grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is very professional and concise. All thoughts are organized well.
20 points Student shows a good understanding of the described topic. 1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc. Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details. 3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others. Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph. Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise. No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned 25 23 25 25
TOTAL 98/100

Freya Kylan

  • Subject: Elvin History
  • Level: Flareadon (7)
  • Mentor: Lady Renette Kim
Grading Understanding Grammar and Mechanics Overall Quality Organization
25 points Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic. No grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is very professional and concise. All thoughts are organized well.
20 points Student shows a good understanding of the described topic. 1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc. Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details. 3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others. Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph. Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise. No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned 0 0 0 0
TOTAL 0/100

Admon Dullake

  • Subject: Elvin History
  • Level: Flareadon (7)
  • Mentor: Lady Renette Kim
Grading Understanding Grammar and Mechanics Overall Quality Organization
25 points Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic. No grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is very professional and concise. All thoughts are organized well.
20 points Student shows a good understanding of the described topic. 1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc. Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details. 3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others. Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph. Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise. No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned 0 0 0 0
TOTAL 0/100

Summer Flores

  • Subject: Elvin History
  • Level: Flareadon (7)
  • Mentor: Lady Renette Kim
Grading Understanding Grammar and Mechanics Overall Quality Organization
25 points Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic. No grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is very professional and concise. All thoughts are organized well.
20 points Student shows a good understanding of the described topic. 1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc. Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details. 3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others. Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph. Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise. No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned 0 0 0 0
TOTAL 0/100

Starkey Whitmore

  • Subject: Elvin History
  • Level: Unicorn (8)
  • Mentor: Lady Renette Kim
Grading Understanding Grammar and Mechanics Overall Quality Organization
25 points Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic. No grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is very professional and concise. All thoughts are organized well.
20 points Student shows a good understanding of the described topic. 1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc. Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details. 3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others. Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph. Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise. No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned 0 0 0 0
TOTAL 0/100

Arianna Aftar

  • Subject: Elvin History
  • Level: Unicorn (8)
  • Mentor: Lady Renette Kim

Sophie Elizabeth Foster, an elf who had been cared for by humans for years, came to the Lost Cities when she was about twelve (human years) or thirteen (elvin years). During her lifetime, she helped change the Lost Cities for the better through a series of events. One was investigating the plague. The Plague was an ogre-created sickness that was made to blackmail the gnomes to service in Ravagog that the Neverseen persuaded Kind Dimitar to use. Sophie, as well as her friends and other Black Swan members traveled to Ravagog to where they found that Panakes was the only cure to the plague. While in Ravagog, Linh Song, an elf traveling with Sophie, flooded the ogre city while attempting to get the other members of the team out. Later, the group discovered that a Panakes Tree was gnome who accepted sacrifice to help others, causing Calla, a gnome friend of Sophie’s, to sacrifice herself in order to end the plague.

Grading Understanding Grammar and Mechanics Overall Quality Organization
25 points Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic. No grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is very professional and concise. All thoughts are organized well.
20 points Student shows a good understanding of the described topic. 1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc. Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details. 3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes. Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others. Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph. Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes. Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise. No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned 25 24 25 25
TOTAL 99/100
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