Foxfire Academy/Elementalism/MD/I/Midterms

Adelaide Luciani

• Subject: Elementalism
• Level: Mastodon (3)
• Mentor: Lady Maren Abrahamsson

Earth and wind are pretty cool elements and a lot can be done with them. One makes up the stuff we stand on, and the other erodes the stuff we stand on. The ability to control earth would be terrakinesis (making up things based on roots). The ability to control wind is gusting. Gusters can also control the weather.

Grading	Understanding	Grammar and Mechanics	Overall Quality	Organization
25 points	Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic.	No grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is very professional and concise.	All thoughts are organized well.
20 points	Student shows a good understanding of the described topic.	1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc.	Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points	Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details.	3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others.	Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points	Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph.	Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise.	No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned	25	24	20	25
TOTAL	94/100

Rhea Libra

• Subject: Elementalism
• Level: Mastodon (3)
• Mentor: Lady Maren Abrahamsson

Grading	Understanding	Grammar and Mechanics	Overall Quality	Organization
25 points	Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic.	No grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is very professional and concise.	All thoughts are organized well.
20 points	Student shows a good understanding of the described topic.	1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc.	Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points	Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details.	3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others.	Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points	Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph.	Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise.	No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned	0	0	0	0
TOTAL	0/100

Adrijana Glenmark

• Subject: Elementalism
• Level: Mastodon (3)
• Mentor: Lady Leana Delaremi

Grading	Understanding	Grammar and Mechanics	Overall Quality	Organization
25 points	Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic.	No grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is very professional and concise.	All thoughts are organized well.
20 points	Student shows a good understanding of the described topic.	1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc.	Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points	Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details.	3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others.	Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points	Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph.	Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise.	No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned	0	0	0	0
TOTAL	0/100

Ayden Carmen

• Subject: Elementalism
• Level: Mastodon (3)
• Mentor: Lady Maren Abrahamsson

Grading	Understanding	Grammar and Mechanics	Overall Quality	Organization
25 points	Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic.	No grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is very professional and concise.	All thoughts are organized well.
20 points	Student shows a good understanding of the described topic.	1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc.	Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points	Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details.	3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others.	Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points	Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph.	Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise.	No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned	0	0	0	0
TOTAL	0/100

Adele Carmen

• Subject: Elementalism
• Level: Mastodon (3)
• Mentor: Lady Maren Abrahamsson

Grading	Understanding	Grammar and Mechanics	Overall Quality	Organization
25 points	Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic.	No grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is very professional and concise.	All thoughts are organized well.
20 points	Student shows a good understanding of the described topic.	1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc.	Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points	Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details.	3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others.	Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points	Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph.	Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise.	No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned	0	0	0	0
TOTAL	0/100

Conner Winds

• Subject: Elementalism
• Level: Dragon (4)
• Mentor: Lady Maren Abrahamsson

Earth and wind help each other. Wind carries the seeds earth needs for its plants, and in turn earth grows plants for wind. They are both very powerful, and as they do things for each other, theoretically they are equals in balance

Grading	Understanding	Grammar and Mechanics	Overall Quality	Organization
25 points	Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic.	No grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is very professional and concise.	All thoughts are organized well.
20 points	Student shows a good understanding of the described topic.	1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc.	Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points	Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details.	3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others.	Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points	Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph.	Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise.	No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned	25	25	25	24
TOTAL	99/100

Demelza Auditore

• Subject: Elementalism
• Level: Dragon (4)
• Mentor: Lady Leana Delaremi

Grading	Understanding	Grammar and Mechanics	Overall Quality	Organization
25 points	Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic.	No grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is very professional and concise.	All thoughts are organized well.
20 points	Student shows a good understanding of the described topic.	1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc.	Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points	Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details.	3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others.	Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points	Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph.	Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise.	No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned	0	0	0	0
TOTAL	0/100

Felicity Cymbre

• Subject: Elementalism
• Level: Dragon (4)
• Mentor: Lady Maren Abrahamsson

Earth is the land that we stand on, ground. Wind is the air around us, able to wear away earth, blow out fire and affect the direction water flows. Wind can shape and manipulate the earth into whatever it likes, whether it is rocks, ground or a tornado that could destroy cities. Earth is the canvas and wind is the paint, Earth is monotonous without the color that wind provides for it. Earth is the material and wind is the tools, alone they are useless and destructive, but together they are something spectacular. Just imagine, if we had earth without any wind we wouldn't have oxygen, and then the earth would be a bland planet without any living creatures. If we had wind but not earth, the world would be a bunch of useless creatures floating around in space. We can't use paint without a canvas. We can't use tools without materials.

Grading	Understanding	Grammar and Mechanics	Overall Quality	Organization
25 points	Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic.	No grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is very professional and concise.	All thoughts are organized well.
20 points	Student shows a good understanding of the described topic.	1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc.	Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points	Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details.	3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others.	Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points	Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph.	Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise.	No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned	25	25	20	20
TOTAL	90/100

Alexander Rodriguez

• Subject: Elementalism
• Level: Dragon (4)
• Mentor: Lady Maren Abrahamsson

Grading	Understanding	Grammar and Mechanics	Overall Quality	Organization
25 points	Student shows an excellent understanding of the described topic.	No grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is very professional and concise.	All thoughts are organized well.
20 points	Student shows a good understanding of the described topic.	1-2 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise, although there may be a few instances of lack of clarity, etc.	Most thoughts are organized well.
15 points	Student shows an understanding of the described topic, although they left out a few details.	3-4 spelling or grammar mistakes.	Student's writing is professional and concise in certain areas but is not clear in others.	Few thoughts are organized well.
10 points	Student has a general grasp of the topic but left out many details in the paragraph.	Over 4 grammar or spelling mistakes.	Student's writing is only very occasionally professional or concise.	No thoughts are organized well.
Points Earned	0	0	0	0
TOTAL	0/100