Thread:72.73.39.77/@comment-35257762-20181001201301

so for some reason, it wouldn't let me reply on the other thread so I'm doing it on here.

okay, so I played around with the title you gave me and this is what I came up with. tell me what you think and if I need to change anything!

I'm hoping for a miracle,

A hope anew,

Waiting for the moment,

You'll tell me this isn't true,

You promised you wouldn't leave,

You promised you would stay,

You told me we'd be forever,

Now you're six feet under the grave,

Pain clouds my eyes,

Hurt stabs my heart,

These thoughts encircle my mind,

Was I not enough?

As I fall down and cry,

These tears of love.  