Thread:TheBookQueen16/@comment-38091595-20190123040418/@comment-38091595-20190124235251

I finished! And can I just say, your writing is actually amazing. I would say publish them, but since they're fanfics you kinda cant... but it's really good. There were a bunch of simple typos which I fixed, but (I hope this isn't offensive, I'm just trying to tell you the main problem that I fixed) there were a lot of commas without spaces after.

Eg. "Mary bought apples,carrots,bananas,and broccoli." Correct eg. "Mary bought apples, carrots, bananas, and broccoli."

So basically you (pretty sure you know this, it was just a computer error or something.) need to put spaces after the commas.