Talk:Belong With You/@comment-34026531-20180321063426

Since it is always good to have constructive feedback, I think that the overall idea of the story is good and the fine points are executed well but I feel like this is quite similar to the start of SWM's KotLC and was wondering whether maybe you could try to change it up a bit? This is purely my opinion and you don't have to change it as it is great just the way it is.