Talk:Imprisoned/@comment-35257762-20180629014622

This sounds great! I can’t wait to read more! Just a slight note, though: you’re writing this in past tense, yet you’re also including present tense. Like, for example, this sentence: “Sometimes, the pain is exactly what you need, though.” This is present tense, and the last tense would be this: “Sometimes, the pain was exactly what you needed, though.” I hope this helped!