Thread:Book Beliefs/@comment-35257762-20180721184455/@comment-35257762-20180722085515

SO

I have a character named Victoria Kandor who is bent on getting revenge on the Neverseen for killing her entire family, and we all know the storyline for the Cledwyn family and such.

What if the Cledwyns have to meet the leader of the Neverseen (who Victoria wants to kill) for negotiating reasons OR because they found that the leader has something they need OR found that the leader isn’t... um, how should I explain this... was forced into becoming the leader by their parents but hates their job, and the Cledwyns try to bring the leader onto their side and betray the Neverseen (it could work in the Cledwyns favour). Victoria knows where the leader is because of Draco and “promises” to help them get to the leader BUT she betrays them and kills the leader and something major happens or something!

Wow, I realize this is very complicated to understand. It sounded much better in my head. But besides that, what do you think?