Thread:Rizi213/@comment-34952067-20180519154255

So my job was to tell you what you could improve in the Sokeefe Fanfic react thing. I think you could put a bit more of the story that is in the fanfic that they are reacting to. Also, watch out for commas, I don’t see anything major but for future references. Be sure to look out of overuse or not enough of them. 