Thread:Book Beliefs/@comment-2601:647:4801:2210:D9D7:E020:507D:2848-20180518021715/@comment-34952067-20180519152828

Okay so what I found in the react fanfic thing for you to fix is punctuations. There was an abundance of exclamation marks and question marks. I understand that you did it to express, but it’s improper punctuation, I changed it. Also, I think you should feature Sophie’s reaction to the Gisela thing more, I doubt that she will just let it slide. Keefe is the same, his crush turns out to be his half-sister, I doubt he would be as cool as a cucumber for that. That is all, first job done! I hope I did well.