Thread:Book Beliefs/@comment-72.73.40.242-20180622021813/@comment-34952067-20180623012719

So I have on big suggestion. Try to cut it down on the dialogue. It will make the story stucture stronger and more in depth. Replace the dialogue with descriptions. Setting, feelings, thoughts. That type of thing. You shouldn’t have to stop your story, these are just some suggestions that should help your writing improve. I hope this helped.