Thread:Rizi213/@comment-72.73.33.91-20180929235020/@comment-35257762-20180930010623

no no, it's superb! the one thing, though, is that it's like a poem. so, um, how about this?

I looked towards the brook,

Wondering why wasn't it me they took?

this voice that haunts me,

giving me endless flatteries,

okay, so that's it so far. but if you don't like it, it's fine!