Thread:Rizi213/@comment-72.73.33.91-20180929235020/@comment-72.73.33.91-20180930010254

Thanks, Rida! It's okay.

Yeah, here will work. Here's what I have so far:

Tears of Love,

She looked towards the brook,

"Why can't it be me they took"

she turned her head,

Away from the shining brook,

She then heard a voice,

say "You look nice"

She turned her head,

and ran to the familiar voice,

She said, "I thought you were dead"

he glanced away and shook his head,

"He risked his own life for mine instead"

"It is the man who now is dead"

that's what I've got so far and it's sorta sad... And not that good..

Crystal