Talk:The Revelation/@comment-34329349-20180901001452

Ok I'm working on my chapter-not that good, but I don't want to delay it longer....Also is it bad that even though it doesn't fit whatsoever, I kind of want to end the chapter with. Keefe's dead. Just to see a war break out divided by chapters. Not really, but perhaps...I won't though for the sake of this fanfic's well being.