Talk:The Revelation/@comment-34652576-20180819164539

New chapter is out! I think it's pretty good, but I'm not sure. If it's too short or long I apologize for that. Also, I changed from present tense to past tense midway through so I'm sorry about that to9o I just needed to get it done and didn't have time to go back and edit the tenses. If anyone wants to edit that they can. Hope you enjoy!