Thread:Book Beliefs/@comment-35489405-20180929164845/@comment-35489405-20180929172204

I'll give you the short version:

When Paris and her twin where young, their parents filed a bad match. This put a burden on Paris, for now no one would talk to her. Her friends had all abandoned her, her brother was off doing who knows what and her parents were to busy dating people to care about her life. After a year of dealing with lonelyness, Paris decided to run away. She new nothing of what awaited her in the world outside the Lost Cities. She soon found herself kidnapped by a group worst that the Neverseen. The group called themselfs the Everflame. The only way Paris survived was by joining this group. After comiting several crimes she ran from the Everflame, just to find out that no one had noticed she was gone.

Is this good, or do you need more?