Thread:Bananazilla the Telepath/@comment-35257762-20180926015336/@comment-34652576-20180926025055

WOAH! That's amazing! It's so freakishly amazing, Rida! I love it!

Wow, my song seems so much worse than that, and it's kind of about loss, which is a lot different than your song, but I think it's decent, considering I've never really tried songwriting before. Not all of it rhymes or anything, but it could sound good I think:

I remember the days, When we used to walk on the beach, Those sweet memories, All wrapped in gold. And I can’t get over, That you are going nowhere, And this isn’t fun anymore. Because I always knew everyday, That we used to go outside and play, I just remember that fateful day, When you left and I never saw you again. Because all those days, when we were free, And you were right there next to me, We were like mirrors, showing each other our reflection, And now I’m feeling your infliction.

Tell me what you think.